Random thing crossing my mind,
Feels like if someone is standing just by my side,
But there is no one around that I can see,
Feels like as if someone is watching me,
Feels like as if it is trying to save me.
Never knew there could be someone like this,
As if there was an angel looking after me,
People said that I was going bonkers,
Said that I need to go see a doctor!
But it did save me from a difficult outcome.
Taught me how to live again,
Gave me a reason to hold on to the grid!
It was not a spirit or en entity,
It was feeling of a new person in life!
Yea sure never seen em till now,
But the presence is felt day n night!
Pictures are something that is holding me tight,
Words of wisdom are on day n’ night,
Trying to get a glimpse is like the best thing,
Waiting for that one phone call is everything!
Hearing that sweet baby voice is the thing,
The talks are somewhat hard to describe,
But hearing that sound is my sweet demise!
Don’t know what should I do to make it permanent,
One day maybe the feeling would be free,
One day maybe she will feel what I feel,
Would wait for that day, wherever it is,
Cause she is the one, I know for sure,
As the memories are a Frozen Vividity of your smile.


Love that idea of dying upon hearing the words of your true love, and metling as her voice speaks into you. Really good, relatable and entertaining!
Thanks for the early reply mate! Glad you liked it!
Excellent! Loved your post today!
Thanks asklotta! You have always been a great reader!!! Cheers mate!
Wow, I feel this one
Glad you do mate!
This is so relatable to me. I feel like a part of it. Well done!
Thanks for the honest reply Beth! Glad you could relate my poetry to your life! Cheers!
Awww, this is so beautiful and heartfelt.
Thanks!!!!! Glad you had fun reading it!
Hey, whatever works; nice poetry…
Thanks appreciate it!
Contents of ‘Vivid’ is as vivid as a person could comprehend, touching every nerrves . Its rhythm never stops till the end. Moving tortuously like a liveling flow of the rivulet. Would like to have many more ike this.
Thanks m glad you liked it mate.